Thursday, March 12, 2009



there is too much noise
rattling around in me
buzzing of stories

unhook the harness
stop holding it all back now
let the beast roam free

wander in the field
there must be something alive
new green shoots of grass

I chew thoughtfully
attempting to rid my self
of all false stories

6 comments:

Devika said...

The series work like a short story, Janet :)

Excellent set..

wishes,
devika

Janet said...

Devika~

haiku catharsis
digest the unwanted stuff
with 3 little lines

Devika said...

Thats the haiku way of life, i think...

truly speaking, after the introduction to Haiku...life's become more easy and interesting..really :)

wishes,
devika

Borut said...

'I chew thoughtfully'. Never thougth of that. What a waste of time!?:)

Janet said...

Borut~ Not a waste of time to find that moment of silence;-)

Borut said...

I was thinking of thoughtless chewing!:)

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