Thursday, January 15, 2009

the riverside



staying clean
has not helped my quest

for healing


embrace then

these muddy waters

and be washed


un-shoulder
the weight of the world

it's not yours

4 comments:

Borut said...

I may have to dive
Into the river of life…
To be really washed!?:)

Why shoulder its weight!?
Let those who own it do it.
This world is not mine!:)

Janet said...

thank you:-)

we can dawdle on the riverbank, but that's no way to experience the flow.

Unknown said...

Very insightful video link to your catartic haiku. I feel cleaner from the experience.

Unknown said...

Cathartic :-)