Saturday, January 24, 2009




water droplets form

on the shower wall, on me
practice writing there

I try out the words
caressed by truth condensing
let them fall like rain




5 comments:

FastDart said...

Janet,
I'm impressed. You have found the perfect place to condense Haiku.
Zenful

Janet said...

thank you. some of the best inspirations come and go in the shower:-)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love the second one!
(I really like the new picture of you, too. :)

Janet said...

nice to see you Andrew:-)

Devika said...

Good one, Janet :)

Borut was keeping me busy all the while ...i seem to have missed some good poetry :)


wishes,
devika

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